The first few chapters were good, but that shower/locker room scene was the first stop on the train to Ridiculous.I might try to give [b:Until You|18260742|Until You (Fall Away, #1.5)|Penelope Douglas|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1375194121s/18260742.jpg|25720207] a shot since it's told from Jared's perspective. (And Douglas's second book will probably be better than this one).